We are learning to...
- write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced
- have an opening statement that tells who what and when
- write the events in the order they happened
- have a conclusion or personal response
Swimming
Room 3 has been swimming on Tuesdays. It is fun because we did lessons with the boards and without the boards and feet too. I felt happy because I learnt to swim on my back. We swim at the school pool because it is our swimming day. Room 4 comes with us. I go in Mrs Small's side. It is fun because we learn new things and we sometimes get a little free time.
Teacher comment:
You have tried hard to write a recount with a beginning, middle and end. Perhaps you could add more details about what you did to swim on your back and the things we did with the boards.
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